Andrew Yim
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Import two skills authored in Claude Cowork: jamie-copy-trimmer as a root-only Jamie skill, and campaign-gate-process as dintel-campaign-designer with full D.intelligence Agent Corps packaging (code/desktop/shared, agent-id 78, Draft & Wait autonomy) since it now sits inside the 70-79 block. Bumps the corps roster count to 9 agents + 1 meta-agent across all sibling skills and registers #78 in the shared USER-GUIDE/README. Also adds .claude/commands wrappers and ~/.claude/skills symlinks so both are usable. Co-Authored-By: Claude Sonnet 5 <noreply@anthropic.com>
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Cliché / Stale Expressions (🟡) — Avoidance Coordinates
This list is for avoiding, not copying. Frequently used = already tired. If a listed expression shows up in the copy, consider replacing it. The "refresh direction" is a lead for finding an alternative, not a ready-made line.
A. Beauty/result show-off (stale)
| Cliché (Korean) | Why it's old | Refresh direction |
|---|---|---|
| 여신, 인형 같은, 리즈 갱신, 인생 리즈 | Ranks looks, unrealistic, 10-years-ago tone | Replace with a concrete everyday-change scene |
| 물광, 꿀광, 동안 미모 | Spent beauty buzzwords | Use the customer's concern language, not glow words |
| 확 달라진, 몰라보게, 환골탈태 | Exaggeration; borders on 심의 risk | Restrain and specify the degree of change |
B. Self-flattering filler (empty)
| Cliché | Why it's old | Refresh direction |
|---|---|---|
| 특별한 당신을 위한, 당신만의 | Said to everyone = says nothing | Name a truly specific concern/situation |
| 아름다움을 완성하다, 당신의 아름다움 | Abstract, boilerplate | Make it concrete with verbs/scenes |
| 프리미엄, 명품, 하이엔드 | Unbacked elevation words | Replace with facts (technique, track record) |
C. Pressure/urgency (also inducement risk)
| Cliché | Why it's old | Refresh direction |
|---|---|---|
| 지금 바로, 서두르세요, 놓치지 마세요 | Pressure cliché, lowers trust | Informational CTA ("편하게 문의해 주세요") |
| 마감 임박, 선착순, 단 O명 | Inducement/pressure, 심의 risk | Keep any time-limited notice plain, strip inducement |
| 후회 없는 선택, 결심만 하세요 | Decision-coercion tone | Leave the decision with the customer |
D. Region/class clichés
| Cliché | Why it's old | Refresh direction |
|---|---|---|
| 강남 언니, 청담동 스타일, 강남 미인 | Regional cliché, fatigue | Replace region with specific result/experience |
E. Over-used "safe" words (the irony)
| Expression | Caution | Refresh direction |
|---|---|---|
| 자연스러운 / 자연스럽게 | The whole industry overuses it → loses distinctiveness | Keep the concept, vary the expression (scene/metaphor). ※ If a brand owns it as a slogan, treat as 🟦 |
| 1:1 맞춤, 나만의 디자인 | Now a standard phrase | Make the "what" of the customization concrete |
F. Form habits (hurt readability)
- Exclamation spam (!!!), emoji overload, question-mark spam → one breath per sentence, restrained emoji
- All-caps / all-bold → emphasize in one place only
Update rule: when you spot a newly-stale expression, add it here per recursive_protocol.md, and demote over-common "effective" phrases into this file.